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雅思大作文篇1
since the big country has been found at october 1st of 1949, the people’s republic of china has gone through a history of 62 years. looking back at the 62 years, especially in recent 30 years, we have made many great achievements in different fields. and china has been the second largest economy in the world in 2010. and as a chinese, i am so proud of our mother country.
however, on the other hand, we also have been losing many other good things such as beautiful environment and traditional culture when the gdp has increased quickly. and we also know that the traditional culture is the soul of an ancient nation. it is the most important thing. but we chinese seem to ignore this. and that many things happened in this year like to remind us to be awake of this phenomenon. the accident of our high speed trains had taken many people’s lives away in july. and that the 2-years-old girl had been hurt to die while 18 passers should to save her.
and in my opinion, the culture and civilization are so important that we can’t lose them. however the economy and technology have been developed, we will have nothing when we lost the important things. as a student, i have no idea that what should i do. and i just want to say, we must develop our traditional culture but not to abandon them.
雅思大作文篇2
in the days when a woman's entire obligation was to be a good daughter, a good wife and a good mother, men and women were far from equal. women suffered sexual discrimination until the so-called feminism came into being. nowadays, feminism has been running for over a century. result? it ran into the extreme of "equality" from my perspective.
most of us agree that men and women should enjoy equality in this modern society. but what on earth does this equality mean? to be "equal", those for feminism would like to share everything with men they split bills, apply for masculine jobs,etc. they intended to buy in all the advantages and disadvantages of being a man. on their long journey to the "equal world",they've forgotten some basic facts they are women. even school children know that women, after all, are different from men both physically and mentally. it is unwise, or even stupid,to ignore all these differences and pursue a so called "equal world". we couldn't expect a man to give birth to a baby as we couldn't expect the sun to rise in the west. likewise, we couldn't expect a woman to become the world's fastest runner,as is simple, but seems forgotten by those feminists.
equality is not bisecting everything. real equality should be built upon the common sense of the basic sexual differences.since some of the jobs can only be done well enough by men,women should not feel discriminated when we fail. after all,there're also some jobs, which can only be perfectly done with women's hands. these are not symbols of inequality, but natural laws. what really counts is equality in rights, reputation,etc. only when all the individuals value the spirit of being equal can women really enjoy equality with men.
雅思大作文篇3
some people think that university should not provide theoretical knowledge, but to give practical training that is beneficial to society.
do you agree or disagree?
the current hot issues concerning higher education include the one of whether university should provide theoretical knowledge or practical training. in my opinion, this issue is closely related to the different aims of different universities and the needs of the economic development of the respective country.
as we know, university education gives a student a better appreciation of such fields as art, literature, history, science, and human relations. therefore, it is necessary for the university to provide theoretical knowledge for those students who intend to receive liberal education.
most universities also have professional colleges that prepare students for careers, such as teachers colleges, agricultural or dental colleges. these colleges, apart from offering some liberal arts courses, usually allocate a certain period of time for professional training. for example, a student at teachers college usually takes a field training at a high school as a student teacher for two or three months.
another important factor on this issue is the needs of the economic development of a respective county. for instance, in china, a great number of advanced professional personnel are needed to keep the pace with the rapid economic development. therefore, cooperative education that combines classroom studies with practical work experience is more appropriate an education china needs at the present time.
in a word, how much emphasis that should be laid on theoretical knowledge or practical training is determined by the needs of the economy of a respective country and the needs of all-round personnel for a democratic society.
雅思大作文篇4
the bar chart given above reflects that the number of readers choosing paper book or electronic books experienced some changes during the past four years. the number of paper book readers decreased slowly from 10 million in 2010 to 8 million in 2013. however, during the same period, the number of electronic book readers increased steadily from 8 million to 12 million.
we learn from the bar chart that people in mounting numbers would like to choose electronic books while less people like paper books. what might account for this phenomenon? reasons can be listed as follows: for one thing, with the widespread availability of electronic devices such as smartphones，tablet pc and electronic reader，it is much easier for electronic books to be applied and popularized. secondly, compared with paper books, electronic books are characterized by convenience in terms of carrying and saving spaces. furthermore, the costs of purchasing and downloading electronic books are lower that of paper books, which enables readers to save a great deal of money. last but not least, electronic books sometimes stand for high fashion and efficiency.
whether electronic books will totally replace paper books one day still seems to be uncertain. however, no matter what kind of books will vanish, the habit of reading books should not be eliminated.
雅思大作文篇5
the government should control the amount of violence in films and on television in order to decrease the violent crimes in society. to what extent do you agree or disagree with this issue?
recently, the discussion about whether the government should control the amount of violence in films and on television has become a heated one. people take diverse attitudes towards this issue. before presenting my view, i seek to analyze the issue from different angles.
from some people’s point of view, there are many good reasons for controlling the amount of violence in films and on television. first, violent films and television can do harm to young people. because they contains numerous of erotic, corrupt and provoking episode, which can bring negative influence to na?ve young people. moreover, since young people are in the formative years, they are not mature enough. they always like imitating their idols, no matter right or wrong, which lead to the increasing of the juvenile delinquents. thirdly, violence begets violence. violent films and television can make people aggressive and cold-blooded, which enhance the violent crime in society. in a word, controlling the amount of violence in films and tv effectively can decrease the violent crimes in society and preserve social security.
many others, however, take a quite strong opposite attitude towards this issue. they believe violent media have their positive sides, which should not be controlled by government. to begin with, there are many valuable education functions in this kind of films and tv. because they can reflect the reality, and we can’t imagine that there aren’t any con information but only pro things in our world. secondly, if the government control the violent films and television, it must influence the development of the entertainment industry. last but not least, they can prepare children for the adult world and teach them to cherish life.
as far as i am concern, i strongly believe that the amount of violence in films and tv should be controlled. at the same time, we cannot deny the advantages brought by them. and the best policy is to develop the merits of the violent films and television, while grading and filtering them, describing that which are not fit for the children to watch.
雅思大作文篇6
在雅思写作中取得一个理想的分数一直是无数考生在不断追求但却始终无法逾越的障碍。大作文在写作中所占整体比例的60%，因此写好大作文确实是取得好成绩的重要保证。而高分文章永远都少不了一个好的架构的支持，并且在高分评分标准中也明确指出：sequences information and ideas logically。因此，在本篇文章中我将给大家说明下议论文的文章架构。
在确定文章的架构之前，我们首先要确定文章的文体。雅思写作一共三种文体，议论文·说明文·混合类。
一.确定何种文体. 议论文和说明文的区别在于问题中是否有两个对立面，即两个相反的观点。
today, the high sales of popular consumer goods reflect the power of advertising and not the real needs of the society in which they are sold.
to what extent do you agree or disagree? (c6t1)
本篇就产品的高销售反应的问题是广告的力量进行了讨论，有对立面agree or disagree因此是议论文。
in some countries the average weight of people is increasing and their levels of health and fitness are decreasing.
what do you think are the causes of these problems and what measures could be taken to solve them?(c8t4)
本篇询问了人们健康水平下降的原因和解决办法，并没有讨论，因此是一篇说明文。
increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems.
to what extent do you agree or disagree.
what other measures do you think might be effective?(c8t3)
本篇文章首先讨论了增加油价是否是最好的方式来解决交通和环境问题，又要求说明其他的办法。既包含了议论又包含了说明，因此这是一篇混合类文章。
从以上的题目可以得出，雅思大作文的文体是可以从问题得出的。只要直接分析问题，就可以得出该篇的文体是
二. 确定类型. 如果确定该篇文章是议论文后，还要确定该篇文章是单边议论文还是双边议论文。而区分这两种文体的方法就是看问题问法。
单边：
1. agree or disagree
2. the advantage outweigh the disadvantage
3. is it a positive or negative trend
该种问法最好的写法是选取一方的观点，这样显得自己的观点清晰。而中立的写法较难，容易出现混淆的现象。
双边：
1. discuss two views and give your opinion
2. what are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend?
该种问法是两种观点的看法都要在文章中出现，客观讨论两种观点，最后再给出自己的观点。
三. 选择架构. 单边类议论文有两种写作方法。一是分段式结构，二是起承转合式写法
分段式结构
第一段 引言，话题切入，观点
第二段 第一个理由
第三段 第二个理由
第四段 重申自己观点，未来的展望(可添加：反方观点的提及)
分段式结构又称一边倒结构，此种写法的难点在于很难写够字数。多数雅思考生发现大作文的观点难思考，即使思考到了也很难写够字数。c5t1后面给出的范文就是个很好的例子，该考生就是因为采取了分段式结构的写法没有写够字数，因此被扣除大量的分数，最后才取得4分的成绩。
起承转合
起 引言，话题切入，观点
承 论据一·二
转 反方观点(说一个驳一个)
合 重申自己观点，未来的展望
该种写法是一种驳论的写法，采取了正方支持反方反对的策略。该种写法不但能很好的支持自己的观点，也对反方进行了反驳，既容易写够字数，又对论证有很大的帮助。因此建议大多数考生采取该种方式。
最后，相信只要广大考生们熟练的运用正确的架构去写文章，经过一段时间的努力分数一定会有一定地突破。
1. in
in 表示“在某世纪、年、季度、月、周”以及泛指的上、下午、晚上。
如：“in 1979 beef was by far the most popular of these foods, with about 225 grams consumed per person per week.” (c7p.164)
就具体使用位置而言，介词 in 通常用于开头段概述图表的内容，或者正文段引出起点数据时使用。
上一个例句就是剑桥7中曲线图的例句，用来表明在起点年份1979年，牛肉的消耗量最高。下面的两个例子则是概述图表的核心内容，其中“in the 1990s”意思是“在20世纪90年代里”。
例1: the two tables contain sales data for fair-trade coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004, in five nations of europe. (c10p.163)
例2: these causes affected different regions differently in the 1990s. (c8p.162)
2. from
from 表示“时间的起点”，可译作“从……”，多用于“from…to/till…”中。
如：“this increased dramatically from about 500 km3 in 1900 to around 3,000 km3 in the year 2000. ”(c6p.163)
介词“from...to...” 的位置往往在正文段落，用来明确指出一个趋势变化的起止点或其他发生重大变化的拐点。而且通常既给出数据又给出年份。
相似的用法还有 “between...and...”。 between...and...表示“时间的起点和终点”，可译作“在…和…之间”。
如：“the chart shows the time spent by uk residents on different types of telephone calls between 1995 and 2002.” (c9p.164)
介词 “between...and...”常用于带有连续时间变化的动态图表(即横轴信息为年份，月份或一天24小时的柱状图和曲线图)开头段中。
3.during
during 表示“在……期间”，后面的信息是一个时间段，而非单一的时间点。
如：“during this 25-year period the consumption of beef and lamb fell dramatically to approximately 100 grams and 55 grams respectively. ” (c7p.164) 其中“during this 25-year period”的意思是“在这25年间”。
此种时间状语往往位于主体段落中，概括曲线的整体变化趋势或其他整体特征。就措辞来讲，也不会与开头段中的“between...and.../from...to...”表达发生重复，可以体现语言的变化。
4.since
since 表示“自从……以来(直到现在)”，后面的信息是一个时间点。整个句子的时态采用完成时态。用来表明一个动态趋势变化的起点。
如：“consumption has fluctuated since 1990 but both now provide 24q. ” (c9p.168)
其中“since 1990” 翻译为“自从1990年起”，整个句子谓语动词选择现在完成时“has fluctuated”用来体现剑桥9中曲线图上的信息“自从1990年起(到现在为止)，该消耗量呈现出波动的趋势。”措辞简洁，语法表达丰富，避免落入窠臼。
5.by
by 指“不迟于，到……时为止，在……以前”，后面的信息是一个时间点，用来表明一个动态趋势变化的终结点。
如：“the cost of insurance saw a rising trend, growing from only 2% to 8% by2001. ”(c8p.164)
其中，“by 2001”的意思是“到2001年为止”。剑桥8的原题是包含三个年份的动态饼图，范文中考官针对所占比例最小的信息“the cost of insurance”简单化处理，仅提出变化趋势和终点年份。
这也从一个侧面体现介词“by”可用在主体段落后半部分，描述图表中次要信息的趋势变化，无需讲所有年份都一一赘述。而在使用介词by时，句子的谓语动词常使用完成时态，用来强调变化业已完成。其他例子如下：
例1：by 2004, sales figures for both products had risen across the board.(c10p.163)
例2：by 2000 nuclear power, which was not used at all in australia, had developed into the main source. (c7p.168)
6. before
before 指“在……之前”，与after相对。后面的信息可以是一个时间点，也可以是名词词组或动名词词组，用来表明一个动态趋势变化的转折点。
如“expenditure on resources such as books had increased to 20% by 1991 before decreasing to only 9% by the end of the period.” (c8p.164)
整个句子翻译为“诸如书籍一类的资源花费到1991年为止上升到20%才呈现出下降趋势。到这一时期末尾为止，花费仅仅只有9%。”
结合原题不难发现，资源花费的变化趋势是“先上升后下降”，介词“before”常用在主体段落中，描述此类含有“先...后...”变化的趋势。
7.after
最后希望众烤鸭们能够善用这个错题分析表，在每一次做题中，发现未知的自己，并加以完善。谨记十字箴言：刷题需谨慎，且错且分析。
雅思大作文篇7
ragon boat festival, often known as tuen ng festival or duan wu festival, is a traditional chinese festival held on the fifth day of the fifth month of the chinese calendar. it is also known as the double fifth.[citation needed] it has since been celebrated, in various ways, in other parts of east asia as well, most notably korea.
the exact origins of duan wu are unclear, but one traditional view holds that the festival memorializes the chinese poet qu yuan of the warring states period. he committed uicide by drowning himself in a river because he was disgusted by the corruption of the chu government. the local people, knowing him to be a good man, decided to throw food into the river to feed the fishes to prevent them from eating qu's body. they also sat on dragon boats, and tried to scare the fishes away by the thundering sound of drums aboard the boat and the fierce looking dragon-head in the front of the boat.
in the early years of the chinese republic, duan wu was also celebrated as "poets' day", due to qu yuan's status as china's first poet of personal renown.
today, people eat zongzi (the food originally intended to feed the fishes) and race dragon boats in memory of qu's dramatic death.
